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radioteacher
Posted 2009-10-21 10:33 AM (#46325)
Subject: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 3006
San Antonio, TX
The road is twisting
Autumn sun on the highway
Victory Vision

Ride Safe
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buddahead
Posted 2009-10-21 10:42 AM (#46327 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 238
SF Bay Area
Very nice... much respect.

With a name like buddahead, I have a somewhat zen approach.

Here's mine...

There was a Thai man from Nantucket
Who's Vision was so large he couldn't tuck it
He said with a grin, as his smokey rear wheel did spin...
I can't wait to ride some beeatches back in Phuket

Edited by buddahead 2009-10-21 10:55 AM
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Trekwolf164
Posted 2009-10-21 10:55 AM (#46332 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Iron Butt

Posts: 965
New York State
The leaves are changing
Vision's wheels are turning
Seats and grips are heated
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varyder
Posted 2009-10-21 11:22 AM (#46333 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 8144
New Bohemia, VA
this bike does straaange things to people....
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Kornbread
Posted 2009-10-21 1:28 PM (#46340 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 97
Okeefenokee Swamp
Here is mine;

Is that a Harley?
No, says I.
methinks,What an idiot.
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mkultra
Posted 2009-10-21 1:33 PM (#46341 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Tourer

Posts: 374
Tucson, AZ
+1 Kornbread.....something I fully understand....

mike
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Breaker
Posted 2009-10-21 3:48 PM (#46345 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Iron Butt

Posts: 732
Western WA
Oh beautiful bike,
Such Lines, such style, except for
Left saddlebag gap.
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Tarpits99
Posted 2009-10-21 4:00 PM (#46346 - in reply to #46345)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Iron Butt

Posts: 742
North Orange County CA
Breaker - 2009-10-21 1:48 PM

Oh beautiful bike,
Such Lines, such style, except for
Left saddlebag gap.


Holy Crap! The bag is supposed to be out of alignment!

Wabi-Sabi. The beauty of imperfection.

I think I just snatched the stone from his palm (metaphorically speaking); and yes I'm still at work.

I must now kill myself in shame for all the nasty comments that I made about the "fit and finish".

Edited by Tarpits99 2009-10-21 4:06 PM
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a99miata
Posted 2009-10-21 5:30 PM (#46352 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Tourer

Posts: 423
northwest florida
I had a vision,
Went for a ride and smiled.
I bought a Vision.
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donetracey
Posted 2009-10-21 6:51 PM (#46356 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 2118
Pitt Meadows, BC Canada
HIAKU is wrong
HAIKU is right
So says Japanese Co-Pilot

I know, I'm not very good at this....
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radioteacher
Posted 2009-10-22 5:13 AM (#46376 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 3006
San Antonio, TX
Sorry for the Haiku diversion. I needed something to take my mind off of the heavy events of the week.

In my search for some humor I remembered a haiku I saw on a t-shirt in Seattle.

Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

Then I remembered reading somewhere that certain haiku's referenced the season. After the reading and the memory, a funky part of my brain came on and the next thing I knew I was posting a Vision Haiku.

Ride Safe
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varyder
Posted 2009-10-22 7:19 AM (#46378 - in reply to #46376)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 8144
New Bohemia, VA
what is hiaku?
it is not about riding
Victory Vision
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Cometman
Posted 2009-10-22 10:47 AM (#46382 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Tourer

Posts: 520
Simi Valley, CA
Ride
Ride today
Ride Tomorrow
Ride
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Minnow
Posted 2009-10-22 10:49 AM (#46383 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: RE: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 143
Sparta, WI
my Vision sets
like a loaded gun
waiting patiently
for me to set our sites
on a target
located south of this soon to be
frozen sand
Arizona the bullseye to be
just the Vision and me
riding out of this wet, cold and nasty land
and darken this fading summer tan





Edited by Minnow 2009-10-22 10:53 AM
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Minnow
Posted 2009-10-22 12:43 PM (#46394 - in reply to #46383)
Subject: RE: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 143
Sparta, WI
Minnow - 2009-10-22 10:49 AM

my Vision sets
like a loaded gun
waiting patiently
for me to set our sites
on a target
located south of this soon to be
frozen sand
Arizona the bullseye to be
just the Vision and me
riding out of this wet, cold and nasty land
and darken this fading summer tan


I have no idea what Haiku or Wabi-Sabi is but wanted to contribute anyway.
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radioteacher
Posted 2009-10-22 1:28 PM (#46397 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 3006
San Antonio, TX
Minnow,

You did fine.

Hiaku's normally have three lines that have 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the last line. Some hiaku's mention a season so I put in Autumn in mine.

Lucky for me today that we had a problem on the other side of town so not only did I get to ride 26 miles to fix the problem but I get paid mileage for the ride. Does that make me a professional motorcycle rider? Hhmmmm? Now I need to find lunch and ride back to the main office.

Ride Safe.
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iluvink
Posted 2009-10-22 2:15 PM (#46400 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Tourer

Posts: 411
Dallas, Texas
The Fall sun will set
My mind's Vision keeps running
I ride forever
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varyder
Posted 2009-10-22 2:28 PM (#46401 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 8144
New Bohemia, VA
still at Hiaku
It is a warmly fall day
get out go riding
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donetracey
Posted 2009-10-22 2:49 PM (#46403 - in reply to #46401)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 2118
Pitt Meadows, BC Canada

Where the heck is Hiaku, Chris?
I can't find it anywhere:

Did you mean:  haiku

Your search - hiaku - did not match any documents.

And why were you staying there?

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varyder
Posted 2009-10-22 3:04 PM (#46405 - in reply to #46403)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 8144
New Bohemia, VA
hey Don, this is my world, you're a guest...
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donetracey
Posted 2009-10-22 3:10 PM (#46406 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 2118
Pitt Meadows, BC Canada
OOPS! Okay - I'll behave (or maybe try to) ..... perhaps
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varyder
Posted 2009-10-22 3:27 PM (#46407 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Visionary

Posts: 8144
New Bohemia, VA
actually, I was just taking off from the subject's spelling Vision Hiaku, even though I believe you are correct, it should be Haiku... but in the scheme of things, not many of us are scholars on here. I hate rereading after I've posted, at best, it makes me look like an idiot savant, as I am good at least one thing...

which could it be, hmmm
hiaku spring haiku
somebody tell me
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Minnow
Posted 2009-10-22 4:40 PM (#46416 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: RE: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 143
Sparta, WI
5 syllables first
7 syllables second
old dog learn new trick
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KansasGuardsman
Posted 2009-10-22 6:47 PM (#46425 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: Re: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 208
Wichita, Kansas
But when saying words
as they are spelled, Japanese
hayaku means fast.

When riding Vision
One may dream of poetry
while thinking of speed.
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Prostreet1
Posted 2009-10-22 6:54 PM (#46426 - in reply to #46325)
Subject: RE: Vision Hiaku


Cruiser

Posts: 184
Allen Park, MI
I saw
I Rode
I spent a load.
....dam thats crappy?

Edited by Prostreet1 2009-10-22 6:55 PM
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